CK Lynn

This was pretty good. The imagery was great, very unique and sort of rhyme-y without being cheesy or kindergartenish. But, as Gahks said, there's just too much to take in. ...

This was a good start, but I wish there was more emotion. You seem to be repeating yourself a lot. And also going like this Which makes it really choppy. ...

I agree with carolinewashere. There isn't much emotion to this poem. It's like "my side hurts". Okay...and? It does seem a little impractical. If you're writing about someone who's in ...

This was awsome. No grammar mistakes or spelling mistake that I could find, and the old English words really added a nice ambiance and belivability to the feeling of it. ...

I like this. It could do with some more punctuation, though. And maybe if you tied the stanzas together a bit more--they seem slightly unraveled. This is good though, subtle ...

I liked this. It wasn't so much screaming "Looky! Looky! Snow!" --as it was a subtle introduction to winter. Very nicely done. THe only thing I have a problem with ...

Full version as of Nov. 16 now up!

I really liked the first stanza, but after that it went downhill. First, there were some grammer errors, like that I think "moon lit" is two words, and please, please ...

This was really kinda preachy. There are a lot of cliches. If you used some more original images, then it could be better. Right now you'e not really making anyone ...

'Ello, H. First off, I like this better than the story about the girl who her's ghosts. That was good, but I like the tone off this piece better. It ...

Thanks! I'll work on the revisions.

A strange, spur-of-the moment poem, but I think it's okay (or better, I hope). I know you never wished as I did, On the night’s first star. Or beneath a ...

I liked this for the most part; the imagery and expression were very unique. There was a lot of emotion that I could definately sense, but it didn't seem over ...

8/10 ^ I don't relly like female singers like Marissa Nadler (which is odd, I know, but their voices are sometimes just too high pitched) 1. A Twist in My ...

'Where are you now?' by Mary Higgins Clark. So far it's pretty good, but a little confusing.